Reply to Drake - Take Care (B&S REMIX)

Ok so i need your help people of djranking s!

This is my first attempt at making a song on ableton and just wanted some general feedback

It is not yet finished but would like to know where I'm going wrong and where I'm going right can you help?

Drake - Take Care (B&S REMIX) INSTRUMENTAL-PREVIEW
http://soundcloud.com/ben_cove/drake-take-care-b-s-remix