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Hey guys, so this is my attempt at some tech house/techno.

This is a rough idea of the arrengement and type of sounds of the song.

I would like if you could give me some advice of parts/sound i could add, take to the song to give it the final polish!

thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/maxflugelman/josue/s-LCMRx