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FIRST PRODUCTION: Unfinished Business

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FIRST PRODUCTION: Unfinished Business Posted on: 04.06.2012 by Sharmaine Pellino http://soundcloud.com/wastedyouthdj/track-1-unfinished There you go, a preview of my first own track, begun from scratch. All comments are welcome, and yes i'm a beginner Thanks!
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Ha! That's rich coming from you. You want to know what's really sad? That you got angry enough to troll my soundcloud page and actually leave a comment Screen shot 2012-06-04 at 2.15.43 PM.jpg Indeed! That was sad. Now you know what it is to read silly, sad comments. A sad way to show that? Absolutely, but I got your attention. And to reply to your post above, I didn't see any community rule: "Post finished tracks only." Forums are there to help people, not to reply random arrogant messages. I'm myself on a community about organising events because that's what I study. Some beginners and first graders ask me some damn dumb questions, but I don't react arrogant and derogatory. You should learn about the kind comments on your soundcloud.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth Starting to bitch on an "unfinished" track, and above all do this with a disrespectful, arrogant tone, is just sad. Ha! That's rich coming from you. You want to know what's really sad? That you got angry enough to troll my soundcloud page and actually leave a comment Screen shot 2012-06-04 at 2.15.43 PM.jpg
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay If by arrogant and stubborn you mean not afraid to speak up and say what's on his mind, then yes. And you're right, parents are free to raise their kids how they want. Mine raised me to believe for myself, not back down and don't be afraid to be honest and go against the grain. To be honest isn't being arrogant and saying everything that comes in your mind. You don't seem to be very intelligent, if you were you would understand that a beginner doesn't know shit about basslines, claps, effects, ... Starting to bitch on an "unfinished" track, and above all do this with a disrespectful, arrogant tone, is just sad.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by jayo You come across as very arrogant and stubborn, and rarely have anything good say. I guess parents are free to raise their kids how they want tho. If by arrogant and stubborn you mean not afraid to speak up and say what's on his mind, then yes. And you're right, parents are free to raise their kids how they want. Mine raised me to believe for myself, not back down and don't be afraid to be honest and go against the grain.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Fine, I said useful and constructive input instead of insight, my mistake that you couldn't make that connection. Ignorant kid.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth You didn't say I would get more insight then. Fine, I said useful and constructive input instead of insight, my mistake that you couldn't make that connection.
Evie Baghdasarian 04.06.2012	No this is what you actually said, Originally Posted by JasonBay That's not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we'll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then. This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they believe of your pizza which is quite different in connotation then your last post. You come across as very arrogant and stubborn, and rarely have anything good say. I guess parents are free to raise their kids how they want tho.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Who said anything about bitching? I left a comment saying you would be better of posting an actual finished product and would get more insight then. Did you not all "all comments are welcomed"? You're the one who started name calling and getting defensive. If what you actually meant was "Only leave a comment if you're only going to say good things and not tell me the truth so I can actually push and strive to be better" then maybe that's what you should have posted instead. No. You're not 'just' commenting. No. You didn't say I would get more insight then. No, I don't want "only good comments" I said 10 times I'm a beginner and want constructive comments. Title: Unfinished track (feedback wanted) Jason: That track is not finished! Title: Unfinished track (feedback wanted) Jason: That track is not finished! Thats like a pizza that is not baked! You really don't see what I mean, don't you.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth Maybe read the title before you start to bitch about "finished tracks" Who said anything about bitching? I left a comment saying you would be better of posting an actual finished product and would get more insight then. Did you not all "all comments are welcomed"? You're the one who started name calling and getting defensive. If what you actually meant was "Only leave a comment if you're only going to say good things and not tell me the truth so I can actually push and strive to be better" then maybe that's what you should have posted instead.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Yeah, I asked for comments on actual finished tracks, not on a rough idea of a sketch. And you said you wanted comments on the "track", and a track this is far from being. Maybe read the title before you start to bitch about "finished tracks"
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth Too lazy to finish? Oh man you got me!!! I'm expecting some comments that will finish my song!!!! No. Just some comments about the fucking bassline or claps or whatever. What's the problem with that, oh master-producer? Didn't you ever ask for an opinion? You should believe before commenting on a beginner's track, most of the time they don't know much and like some help. Yeah, I asked for comments on actual finished tracks, not on a rough idea of a sketch. And you said you wanted comments on the "track", and a track this is far from being.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Ha! That's rich coming from you. You want to know what's really sad? That you got angry enough to troll my soundcloud page and actually leave a comment Screen shot 2012-06-04 at 2.15.43 PM.jpg Indeed! That was sad. Now you know what it is to read silly, sad comments. A sad way to show that? Absolutely, but I got your attention. And to reply to your post above, I didn't see any community rule: "Post finished tracks only." Forums are there to help people, not to reply random arrogant messages. I'm myself on a community about organising events because that's what I study. Some beginners and first graders ask me some damn dumb questions, but I don't react arrogant and derogatory. You should learn about the kind comments on your soundcloud.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth Starting to bitch on an "unfinished" track, and above all do this with a disrespectful, arrogant tone, is just sad. Ha! That's rich coming from you. You want to know what's really sad? That you got angry enough to troll my soundcloud page and actually leave a comment Screen shot 2012-06-04 at 2.15.43 PM.jpg
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	And I'm telling you, as a beginner the best thing you can do is, instead of posting little samples and snippets, is actually finish tracks and post those up then for us to listen to and then critique. And if you don't know shit about basslines, claps, effects and so on jump on Google, do a search search. Read some articles and tutorials, check out some video's on Youtube. Instead if not knowing about it, go and educate yourself on the subject at hand.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay If by arrogant and stubborn you mean not afraid to speak up and say what's on his mind, then yes. And you're right, parents are free to raise their kids how they want. Mine raised me to believe for myself, not back down and don't be afraid to be honest and go against the grain. To be honest isn't being arrogant and saying everything that comes in your mind. You don't seem to be very intelligent, if you were you would understand that a beginner doesn't know shit about basslines, claps, effects, ... Starting to bitch on an "unfinished" track, and above all do this with a disrespectful, arrogant tone, is just sad.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by jayo You come across as very arrogant and stubborn, and rarely have anything good say. I guess parents are free to raise their kids how they want tho. If by arrogant and stubborn you mean not afraid to speak up and say what's on his mind, then yes. And you're right, parents are free to raise their kids how they want. Mine raised me to believe for myself, not back down and don't be afraid to be honest and go against the grain.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Fine, I said useful and constructive input instead of insight, my mistake that you couldn't make that connection. Ignorant kid.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth You didn't say I would get more insight then. Fine, I said useful and constructive input instead of insight, my mistake that you couldn't make that connection.
Evie Baghdasarian 04.06.2012	No this is what you actually said, Originally Posted by JasonBay That's not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we'll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then. This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they believe of your pizza which is quite different in connotation then your last post. You come across as very arrogant and stubborn, and rarely have anything good say. I guess parents are free to raise their kids how they want tho.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Who said anything about bitching? I left a comment saying you would be better of posting an actual finished product and would get more insight then. Did you not all "all comments are welcomed"? You're the one who started name calling and getting defensive. If what you actually meant was "Only leave a comment if you're only going to say good things and not tell me the truth so I can actually push and strive to be better" then maybe that's what you should have posted instead. No. You're not 'just' commenting. No. You didn't say I would get more insight then. No, I don't want "only good comments" I said 10 times I'm a beginner and want constructive comments. Title: Unfinished track (feedback wanted) Jason: That track is not finished! Title: Unfinished track (feedback wanted) Jason: That track is not finished! Thats like a pizza that is not baked! You really don't see what I mean, don't you.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth Maybe read the title before you start to bitch about "finished tracks" Who said anything about bitching? I left a comment saying you would be better of posting an actual finished product and would get more insight then. Did you not all "all comments are welcomed"? You're the one who started name calling and getting defensive. If what you actually meant was "Only leave a comment if you're only going to say good things and not tell me the truth so I can actually push and strive to be better" then maybe that's what you should have posted instead.
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Yeah, I asked for comments on actual finished tracks, not on a rough idea of a sketch. And you said you wanted comments on the "track", and a track this is far from being. Maybe read the title before you start to bitch about "finished tracks"
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth Too lazy to finish? Oh man you got me!!! I'm expecting some comments that will finish my song!!!! No. Just some comments about the fucking bassline or claps or whatever. What's the problem with that, oh master-producer? Didn't you ever ask for an opinion? You should believe before commenting on a beginner's track, most of the time they don't know much and like some help. Yeah, I asked for comments on actual finished tracks, not on a rough idea of a sketch. And you said you wanted comments on the "track", and a track this is far from being.
Maricruz Mouw 04.06.2012
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by seitz is the intention a chiptune? Don't quite know what you mean with that, i'm pretty new to all the production terms.. You mean clips (like drumsounds/basslines) brought together in one song? Yes and no, the drumline was indeed a clip, but that's the only one. The rest is 'self-made'. I know it's not great, tought i'd get some decent help about things I just can't know cause i'm a beginner.
Maricruz Mouw 04.06.2012	is the intention a chiptune?
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay So is posting unfinished work expecting people to help you because you're too lazy to finish it Too lazy to finish? Oh man you got me!!! I'm expecting some comments that will finish my song!!!! No. Just some comments about the fucking bassline or claps or whatever. What's the problem with that, oh master-producer? Didn't you ever ask for an opinion? You should believe before commenting on a beginner's track, most of the time they don't know much and like some help.
Maricruz Mouw 05.06.2012	oh hello 1980's...needs more bits
Georgina Schatzman 05.06.2012	Originally Posted by WastedYouth You're comments are just pathetic. So is posting unfinished work expecting people to help you because you're too lazy to finish it
Sharmaine Pellino 05.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay That's not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we'll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then. This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they believe of your pizza God.. You're such a retard. And that's NOT because you don't like/ give a contructive comment on my 'track' You're comments are just pathetic.
Georgina Schatzman 05.06.2012	That's not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we'll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then. This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they believe of your pizza
Sharmaine Pellino 04.06.2012	Originally Posted by JasonBay Why's it so short? Because I don't have a decent drop in my mind, plus it would be too boring if I last this 3 mins, I've got an idea, but it doesn't get further than this at this moment.
Georgina Schatzman 04.06.2012	Why's it so short?

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FIRST PRODUCTION: Unfinished Business