Critique?
Critique? Posted on: 02.01.2011 by Christen Hedayati http://soundcloud.com/adamcook/progressiv-1like 3rd track I've made in ableton. it's not mastered yet but any critique would be awesome! | |
| Carli Halsall 06.01.2011 |
Originally Posted by Slater
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| Christen Hedayati 02.01.2011 | http://soundcloud.com/adamcook/progressiv-1 like 3rd track I've made in ableton. it's not mastered yet but any critique would be awesome! |
| Carli Halsall 06.01.2011 |
Originally Posted by Slater
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| Christen Hedayati 06.01.2011 | Awesome thanks! Yea I have problems with off-grid production in Ableton, especially swing and long triplets. Perc seems to be my main problem, so I'll definitely start working on it |
| Carli Halsall 04.01.2011 | This being only your 3rd production I find your mixdown exceptionally good. The bass-line could be a bit more prominent. Don't bring up the higher frequencies there, that will cause clashing. Just bring up the level a little bit. Other than that I believe the percussion could use a lot more variation. Try playing around with different closed and open hi-hats and variate the patterns also. Especially with closed hi-hats you can get a lot more groove into a track if you place them off the standard grid. Makes it sounds a lot more human and groovy. |
| Christen Hedayati 03.01.2011 | thanks! yea i'll kill those hats a little and i believe i need to up the treble on the lower bass. when i listen to it through my laptop speakers, the low end is completely gone |
| Verona Fashbaugh 02.01.2011 | Not bad. A little housey for my taste, but it's nicely done. If you're looking for critique (as your title suggests), I would definitely turn down your whole drum rack a little bit. Your hats seem especially loud. But that's just me. Have you produced anything before, or is Ableton your first dive into production? |
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