new electro house tune
new electro house tune Posted on: 24.02.2011 by Kristin Tesfamichael just started out about a month ago, and have been trying to learn as much as possible. anyways I feel like i need as much feedback as I could get right now. http://soundcloud.com/kidswguns/kids-with-guns-hey-original please tell me what you believe. | |
| Kristin Tesfamichael 24.02.2011 | just started out about a month ago, and have been trying to learn as much as possible. anyways I feel like i need as much feedback as I could get right now. http://soundcloud.com/kidswguns/kids-with-guns-hey-original please tell me what you believe. |
| Kristin Tesfamichael 26.02.2011 | ^ thank you so much. I really appreciate when i get feedback like that |
| Gertrude Razzano 24.02.2011 | I don't know if you did it on accident, but that synth stab sounds really fucking cool. With the way it sits with the hi hat, I thought it was a vocal sample. Add some white noise sweeps throughout the song to accentuate the beginning and end of phrases and give a sense of progression, and also to make it less conspicuous when you add a new sound. But the drop after the breakdown could use some beef. The best thing about electro is huge harmonically rich bassline. Unless it's Dirty Dutch, but that's the music of cretins. But the best honest advice I can give? Leave it. If you've got a bunch of new techniques to try out, start a new track. Call it done, otherwise it'll never be and you'll just keep updating and replacing things every time you learn a new trick. A month is very long time to be working on a track, and what do you have to show for that month of work? Just one tune, and now you're on here fishing for compliments or hoping for some new wonder method to save it because even though it was destined to be your best work yet not too long ago, it now somehow sounds like shit to you. Trust me, I've been there several times too many. Your track sounds good, but it will always sound bad to you at this point because you're sick of it. I'm not sure if this effect ever wears off because I've never really looked at tracks I've aborted. When the day comes when you can't remember how it goes anymore, try listening to it then. It might be then that you decide you're ready to finish it. But chances are, you'll laugh at how amateur it sounds compared to your recent work and delete it with a newly gained sense of progress. |
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