first track made in ableton. Feedback please!!!!

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first track made in ableton. Feedback please!!!!
Posted on: 15.02.2011 by Coleen Stenman
hey guys title explains it all really. looking for your criticism rather it good or bad. thanks to all the readers!

respect,
paul iv

http://soundcloud.com/1paul2paul/iv-piano-in-cali
Coleen Stenman
15.02.2011
hey guys title explains it all really. looking for your criticism rather it good or bad. thanks to all the readers!

respect,
paul iv

http://soundcloud.com/1paul2paul/iv-piano-in-cali
Crystal Imfeld
08.03.2011
like the track paul although its not something i would normally listen to its wery down beat, production wise i couldnt fault it it is missing something that would make it stand out i loved what you did with the hats though
Crystal Imfeld
16.02.2011
paul the soundcard on my parents laptop aint great im stuck down at their house, but from what i could here i liked, but as i said i couldnt get a good listen to it.

As soon as i do i will defo be back with some feedback.
Hobert Haubold
16.02.2011
Its a great start. It seems to me that you are taking a long time to say what your sayin. I would suggest more one shots, effect layers to change it up, and crash cymbals make things pretty epic.
hit me up if you have any questions I can help you with:
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Franklin Momany
15.02.2011
I agree w/ 16b. Its missing something dramatic or bold. But your on you way, at this rate your future in producing is looking rather promising.

ITS ALSO MISSING A DOWNLOAD BUTTON IN THE LINK!!! XD
Coleen Stenman
15.02.2011
i appreciate the structured criticism and that makes alot of sense of giving it more depth. thanks man! anybody else out there with some feedback?!?
Alyse Plantenga
15.02.2011
Very groovey. I like it. I believe it needs something extra, some sort of ambience, thats subtle in the background just to give it some more depth and space.

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