Little feedback for the crew

I have been working on this intro like a month for a set that I being working like a year I dont have to much time to get in the ableton I preffer mix my weed out in my s4
But whats a good set withouth a good intro. I like the results it still need a lot of work any suggestions, comment anything I will aprecciate it

I want to remix the hole first song any thoughts?

http://soundcloud.com/baionic/feedback-intro