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First Finished track!!! would love some feedback!
Posted on: 11.01.2013 by Arthur Beskin
I finished my first track today and i would really love some feedback positive or negative so I know what i need to improve on the tracks unmastered and i hope thats alright also if anyone would like to master it let me know haha thanks for reading
- Max
https://soundcloud.com/goldrich/rich-gold-original-mix
Arthur Beskin
12.01.2013
Originally Posted by antifmradio
Goldrich
What did you use to produce / sequence this track?
If you could, would you please send me the samples you used to create it?

Want to see if i can give it a quick MASTERING for you.
Ill make sure to layer everything out in the same time frames.

However, If you used Sonar (cakewalk)
or FruityLoops say versions 8 - 10 to create this. YOu can actually export the entire project as a FL file and as a Project Bones
and send me both files.
I did all the producing/sequencing in ableton and where would you like me to send the samples to that would be awesome if you could master it!
Arthur Beskin
11.01.2013		I finished my first track today and i would really love some feedback positive or negative so I know what i need to improve on the tracks unmastered and i hope thats alright also if anyone would like to master it let me know haha thanks for reading
- Max
https://soundcloud.com/goldrich/rich-gold-original-mix
Arthur Beskin
12.01.2013
Originally Posted by antifmradio
Goldrich
What did you use to produce / sequence this track?
If you could, would you please send me the samples you used to create it?

Want to see if i can give it a quick MASTERING for you.
Ill make sure to layer everything out in the same time frames.

However, If you used Sonar (cakewalk)
or FruityLoops say versions 8 - 10 to create this. YOu can actually export the entire project as a FL file and as a Project Bones
and send me both files.
I did all the producing/sequencing in ableton and where would you like me to send the samples to that would be awesome if you could master it!
Arthur Beskin
12.01.2013		Well thank you very much and ill definitely look up key and pitch shifting i dont know much about it at all haha
Libbie Orion
11.01.2013		Goldrich
What did you use to produce / sequence this track?
If you could, would you please send me the samples you used to create it?

Want to see if i can give it a quick MASTERING for you.
Ill make sure to layer everything out in the same time frames.

However, If you used Sonar (cakewalk)
or FruityLoops say versions 8 - 10 to create this. YOu can actually export the entire project as a FL file and as a Project Bones
and send me both files.
Mirella Bohland
11.01.2013		Goldrich - I believe overall for a first stab you did well. Some of the pitch adjustments seemed a little out of key however, so I would definitely do some homework on pitch/key shifting so all the sounds/chords sound in tune.

I liked the minimal sound and look forward to your next work.

~obscure
Starla Lansdon
11.01.2013		Needs more variation and the whole the whole thing sounds way too "dry" for my taste. Gry adding some effects, more sweeps and variation on the melodies, add some instruments as well, to keep the listener interested.

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