Reply to FL Studio Project-01

the song/video below is what i used to make 2x - 1 shot beats. and i got them from somewhere in the first 40 seconds. and then i spent 2-3 hours on making it creative. and below the video is the soundcloud clip of the loop i made.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W81McSr6T-4[YOUTUBE]



http://soundcloud.com/cutflow/fl-studio-project-01

its 12 bars. and when i come back from school, i will try to stretch those moans to mayb last a bit longer

but anyways what do you believe? does it sound the same? obviously the same? the same with a twist? or is it creative? if its the same, does that mean i failed/needs more work?