Reply to New Track Released!!!Feedback are welcome.

Ehy guys!I want to share with you my first track.It is very simple but i like it.
Check my myspace (www.myspace.com/calvincampbell)to listen it.
The song is called "Paul Calling", it is inside the typical player.Then tell me what do you believe about it.If you say that it's totally bad tell me more: why?
So I can improve myself and try to do my best next time!
Thank you all very much.
C.C.