Reply to Second track ever made

So, fellow ranking ers. What do you believe about this little experiment? Make sure your subs are on, 'cause the bassline is quite heavy.

It's actually the second i sort of 'finished', it's the first track i actually use build-ups using white noise and reverbs. It's totally unmastered, needs vocals and some more filling.

But anyway, here goes:
http://soundcloud.com/whytewip/try13-work-in-progress