Reply to first step to dubstep

So, I wanted to try out creating something dubsteppy. This is what I got so far, so thought Id upload it and see what you guys thought. Its not mastered or anything just so you know.

I just wanted to see where I ended up and this where I am so far, any thoughts, ideas or critizism. Hit me!

http://soundcloud.com/montgomery/cottoncandy-bubblegum-1-1