Reply to Hard Hitting Dubstep. Taylor Thomas - Lucrative (WIP))

This is my first dubstep production, and I really need some feedback. I'm mainly into the electro-house scene, but alot of people have been asking me to make dubstep, so here it is! Kinda.

This is a VERY, VERY, VERY rough draft. I may change the structure one more time, or the first breakdown to add more synth lines to make it glitchy, but it's all undecided. That why I need you to tell me whether it's good, bad, what to improve, what to take out.

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/thedjcollision/taylor-thomas-lucrative/s-nMIxW