Reply to My ears feel NUMB =D need ideas/feedback on an unfinished track

Been working on this track for a few days now and i feel like ive reached a dead end with it =D it felt like i was getting there but didnt make it so i would appreciate any feedback or ideas with the track

After working on it for 2 i took a break from even listening to it but it left me with even less ideas to improve =D

http://soundcloud.com/epicue/epique-cheap-trick-unmastered