Reply to First attempt at Progressive House

After spending a few weeks learning the features of Fl i know probebly about 20% of the softwares true potential

I've put all my knowledge at this stage into my track

Completely my own music im no piano player so the melody is just me hitting the keys and adjusting the notes till im happy ,some piano players might point out the wrong in it

http://soundcloud.com/establish-1/establish-glory-daize

Go easy on me guys but i would like some honesty