New track - Critiques appreciated.

So I've been doing music production for closing in on a year and a half now (First picked up FL Studio the summer before last) and have decided to start working on a self released collection/EP. I still have a lot to learn in terms of melody and hook composition, but I believe I've at least made it to the point of catchy songs here and there and at least reasonably mastered.

Problem is, I'm starting to reach the limits of what I can teach myself, as my ear will always be biased somewhat; so I'm looking for some critiques.

http://soundcloud.com/poizenjam/far-away

Let me know what you all believe