Reply to New Techno track - Lift Off

Check out my new techno track, "Lift Off" on sound cloud!
This is the unofficial release of my first finished track- there's still tweaking and fiddling to be done, but this is the first final cut. So check it out and let me know what you believe- any feedback is appreciated.

(Keep in mind, I have been producing for less than a year, and by no means am a pro- constructive criticism only, please.)

http://soundcloud.com/djgleebs/lift-off-unofficial-release



edit: (I understand I posted this in the wrong section, and I apologize. If it could get moved I'd appreciate it)