Reply to Constructive Criticism

I would have posted this in the mixes/production community but it seems to be that there's so many mixes posted there that individual tracks get swept under the rug and it's hard to garner any kind of serious feedback so I've turned to the Music Production community instead where I'm sure there's some avid producers willing to give their 2 cents on this new track I finished the other day.

It's kind of dark, almost creepy sounding. The mastering/levelling needs to be tweaked but the composition is arranged decently, in my opinion. I believe there might be a little bit too much going on in the track, I'm not sure, that's why I hope some of you here can leave your input! I will do the same for yours if you have anything in need of a second listening.

http://soundcloud.com/d-troy/convoluted-universe