Reply to First collab track

Hey guys,

This is one of my first posts here. I'm active on several community s but I'm new here. Will give some people feedback in the future

So, I'm producing for a couple of years now and actually producing seriously in the last year. Will have my first release in 2013 though.
This is the first finished track with a friend of mine. It's still a work in progress! Would like to know what you believe of it guys.

http://soundcloud.com/cleansober/clean-sober-yeahyeah-original/s-kMi25

Greets

[oh, sorry. I guess this topic should be under 'Mixes and productions'.]