Reply to My first attempt at minimal techno feedback appreciated!

I've been writing rock driven electronic music (www.soundcloud.com/alchemy1) since I started and today I felt in the mood of trying to make some minimal techno/ micro house track.
tell me what you believe about it, what would you do etc. Its my first attempt attempt at this genre, the mix is not done, it's just a sketch of the track so that I can have feedback on it!
thank you for your time!

http://soundcloud.com/maxflugelman/01-1