Reply to New To Ableton, Thoughts on First Song?

Hey guys.

Been a fan of this community for a while now but it took me till last week to get hold of ableton and actually start producing. Its been hard going even learning the basics but i've managed to get something down to record after a week of working. I don't believe i've stopped since I installed last saturday. Was hoping someone on here could take a look and see what they make of it?

EDIT - Updated with trimmed down version of the track based on suggestions from here.

https://soundcloud.com/wintermuteuk/calling-all-cars