Reply to My New Track - "Yes, I Want the Cherry" by EDGEK8D

DJTToolers:

Please have a listen to my new song. I hope you can't tell that it is the first piece of music I've ever made.

https://soundcloud.com/edgek8d

Comments, criticisms? If you have just a moment for a few words, I'd really like to get better. Thank you.

Cheers!