Reply to "Headway" (Demo)

Hey everyone,


So this is one of my first really serious songs. I'm still claiming it as a demo because I plan to revisit it later and add in more parts. But I believe it's good for what it is right now. Everyone that I've played it for had no idea what to believe of it. But I was hoping to get some feedback from you guys. Anything would be much appreciated.


http://soundcloud.com/dcaxeslinger/headway-demo


Cheers DJTT,

Dalton