Reply to Techno track, work in progress, need feedback

https://soundcloud.com/bartpoort93/latest-track-november/s-J36Gr

So this is my progression so far and basic arrangement is almost done, the skeleton is there but I'm kind of at a dead-end, it seems the bass is a bit off and the texture sounds in there are still raw, anyway I would like some suggestions and honest feedback. Really, a set of objective ears would be helpful, what do you believe?
Thanks in advance