Reply to Some advice ?

Hi the community !!

https://soundcloud.com/poukav/happy-monday-original-mix

Here is the link of my first own song. I mean that's not a remix. Created A-Z.
So any advice, comment, point of view is welcome.

As I don't have many guys who know this kind of stuff around me, style and producing music. That would be really great !!

Cheer from France !