Reply to My first sharing with the world

Here it is, the first track I was happy enough to put online. Also, my first MashUp. This is a rough version taken from my mixer as I performed this. I plan to create a smoother produced version, but wanted some feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/stitch-2/love-the-way-you-fly

Be gentle, Im a beginner.

!STiTCH!