Reply to Dj Baws Xerto - First mix

Hi guys this is my first mix in djing. It's not a big mix just something that i tried to start with it. My dj friend told me it's not that good so i wanted to post it here and get some feedback so i can learn how to create some good mix's.

I really want to become good at mixing so say what u believe bad good "u shoulda do this and that". Thank you in advance

Here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlT03nisvtk

Btw sorry for my bad english