Reply to B.o.B. - Airplanes rap remix (Chris X)

Hey guys,

i'm not really a rapper, but i tour with rappers so i do enjoy writting and singing some rap from time to time. here's a Rap remix i did of Airplanes by B.o.B. and Hayley Williams. lyrics and vocals provided by yours truly. Lemme know what y'all believe!

http://soundcloud.com/dj-x-5/chris-x-airplanes-remix

EDIT: This is NOT a production remix like most that are posted here. It's a Rap remix. i didnt touch the beat at all! (except increase the number of bars between the choruses)