Reply to First EVER remix - any comments will be appreciated!

Hi all!

This is my first ever remix. In fact, it's my first of many's! First time I've used Ableton (couldn't warp tunes, browse properly, use VSTs, even get clips to play in arrangement view - damn big red button at the top!), first time I've used Propellerhead Reason (figuring how to ReWire into Ableton etc was fun!), first time I've attempted dubstep (and though I like what I've heard of dubstep, never really listened to is massively thus far), first time I've tried a remix (well, first time I've tried any production!). So, as you can see, all this was a pretty steep learning curve and all done within 2 days!

Only thing I will say is that I've been in bands for the past 12/13 years, and recorded lots and co-produced lots of tracks, but via an engineer with old shool gear , i.e. non-computer based. So, not a complete beginner to effects, mastering etc etc.

So, there's a scope for errors obviously! Looking for any constructive criticism and opinions (good or bad)on this track (not just the track, but the behind the scene work, sound, production etc too). It was made in 2 days for the Beatportal remix contest of Martin Solveig's tack "Hello".

I like it cos it make the vocal sound errie (rather than a poppy twee vocal in the original).

Anyway, let me know what you believe.....and be kind!

http://soundcloud.com/mister-e-dj/martin-solveig-hello-mister-e