Reply to New to the Producing Game...Give my first song a listen?!

I've only been In the music game for about 7 months now. Started off with a simple Idea, that I could go somewhere with music. So I bought some crap Mixer and started djing and learning the basic's of everything there is to do with music and music production. Now I'm on the second chapter and hopefully i'll go far with it. This is literally my 5th day to sit down and work with ableton on a constant level, and this is what got. I know it's pretty shitty, not too much structure to it, but I didn't want to start over so I just kept with it lol and I thought I'd share my first song. Give it a listen and let me know how I could improve. Just don't be too harsh :eek:

http://soundcloud.com/larry-king/tmd-fresher-than-poppin