Reply to Trance+Hint of Electro! My first for the Genre!

I would absolutely love any feed back good/bad!! Please Help!
I felt like sometimes I had trouble with where to bring in vocals, do you have any tips?

Thank you for listening!
Jonny

http://soundcloud.com/jonny-hork/slake-your-trance

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2) Stay Forever (Feat. Emma Hewitt) - Allure
3) Daisy - Original Mix - Sander Van Doorn
4) Forbidden City - Marc Simz
5) iPeople (Original Mix) - Nitrous Oxide
6) My Everything (Feat. Kate Miles) - Allure
7) My G_O_D - Guns On Demo - Tiesto Remix Laidback Luke
8) Pearlescent - Original Mix - Liquid Vision
9) Alright 2011 feat. Marcus Schossow - (Marcus Schossow Remix) Red Carpet, Marcus Schossow
10) Punk - Arty Rock-N-Rolla Mix - Ferry Corsten
11) Let The Light Shine In 2010 - Arty Remix Darren Tate, Jono Grant
12) Anjunabeach (Original Mix - Above & Beyond
13) Still With Me (Club Mix) - Tritonal, Cristina Soto
14) Slumber feat. Lindsey Ray (Original Mix) - Steve Forte Rio, Lindsey Ray
15) Who is Watching feat. Nadia Ali (Tone Depth Extended Mix) - Armin Van Buuren