Chlorophyll - Incarnate (Original Mix) [Minimal Tech-House] Feedback Appreciated :)
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Chlorophyll - Incarnate (Original Mix) [Minimal Tech-House] Feedback Appreciated :) Posted on: 23.04.2012 by Chas Giraldez http://soundcloud.com/chlorophylll/chlorophyll-incarnate-originalI fairly satisfied with how it turned out, let me know if you believe there's something I could improve. | |
| Meaghan Kallmann 23.04.2012 |
Originally Posted by Garygary1
- The intro felt a little unfinished -- I almost turned the track off. Would bring the pads in right from the start as a hook. - The overall track was a bit "dry." I believe you could use more strategic reverbs and FX at various places in the track to get more movement and texture. - The kick could have had more weight. Listen to some Maya Jane Coles (if you don't already) for a great example of tracks that are subdued and atmospheric, but with a walloping kick - Speaking of the kick, the relationship between the kick and the toms and bass midway through the track (maybe elsewhere too, but it stood out here) was a bit muddy. The toms / bass might need some lows cut and a sidechain compressor thrown on them? Overall, basically, just feels like it needs a little work on the mix and master. But it's a gorgeous atmospheric track with tons of texture and a nice grove. Excellent work. |
| Chas Giraldez 23.04.2012 | http://soundcloud.com/chlorophylll/chlorophyll-incarnate-original I fairly satisfied with how it turned out, let me know if you believe there's something I could improve. |
| Meaghan Kallmann 23.04.2012 |
Originally Posted by Garygary1
- The intro felt a little unfinished -- I almost turned the track off. Would bring the pads in right from the start as a hook. - The overall track was a bit "dry." I believe you could use more strategic reverbs and FX at various places in the track to get more movement and texture. - The kick could have had more weight. Listen to some Maya Jane Coles (if you don't already) for a great example of tracks that are subdued and atmospheric, but with a walloping kick - Speaking of the kick, the relationship between the kick and the toms and bass midway through the track (maybe elsewhere too, but it stood out here) was a bit muddy. The toms / bass might need some lows cut and a sidechain compressor thrown on them? Overall, basically, just feels like it needs a little work on the mix and master. But it's a gorgeous atmospheric track with tons of texture and a nice grove. Excellent work. |
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