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hey everyone, another noob here. Did my first track the other day and like many others am looking for some feedback. it might be a little different to some of you, i actually didn't even mean to make a track, was just practicing with chord inversions, and ended up snowballing. Anyway I'll take any opinions, tips, constructive criticism, praise, insults...

http://soundcloud.com/scott-cardea/here-and-now