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http://soundowl.com/track/3t6y/-demo...llow-remix-mp3

It's the first one...(Demo for Jay)
Here's a remix I made for a friend. He wanted me to do anything with Wiz khalifa... So I took out my trusty F1 and got to work. Let me know what you believe and what I could improve on. The beat consists of only things found in the Dirty Trap remix set.

Ps, there's a little scratching at the end. I'm totally new at it, but I thought i'd throw it in for fun.