Reply to Critique my song please

Hey guys,

Ive been working on Ableton and after many unfinished songs I was able to finish this one. Somehow I arrived at a lounge style track - so i decided to just roll with it. Let me know what you believe, if there is anything im missing, and recommendations Short Link to soundcloud below (sorry couldnt figure out how to embed it here)
http://snd.sc/QwSwkJ
Cheers