Reply to Would appreciate some feedback on an Electro House original.

http://soundcloud.com/secretseahorse/zeitgeist-original-mix

Hey guys, i just posted this up, and i had fun producing it, but i feel like it's missing something.. Can anyone put a finger on it? Feedback would be greatly appreciated, what to change, mixing problems (sub too loud maybe?). Another question i would like to ask is ..could i play this out?

Thanks alot guys!