Reply to Marcella Precise - PAN AN (Alpha Vision Remix Work in Progress)

Here's my first track i'm producing under my new artist name: Alpha Vision!
It's an Work in Progress, so be gentle, i would love to hear some tips on how to make things better.

Here it is: https://soundcloud.com/alphavision/marcelle-precise-pan-an-alpha

Check me out on soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/alphavision
Or facebook: http://facebook.com/alphavisionpage

Thanks!