Reply to House Dub and Trap Mix, Looking for critical feedback please!

http://www.mixcloud.com/daniel_dow_D...-mix-11_18_12/

Hey guys, I work at a proffesional djing company who runs most of the bars and weddings in the area. Problem is I am not 21 for another few months, so I dont get much feedback or opportunity to show my mixing to my boss and peers. My friends like them but they are biased. This is not my cleanest mix, but it is a pretty fair representation of my mixing and where some of my weak points are, even if they dont show in all of my mixes. Any positive or negative feedback would be great!

Also I am running through traktor 2.6, w/o sync function. Thanks for your time