i need some tips for finishing this?

i need some tips for finishing this?
Kenton Almeyda
16.02.2013
I listened on the speakers of a LCD TV in my hotel room while drinking "Lagunitas Sucks!". Go 2013! Here's my feedback.

Needs more cowbell.

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But seriously, about all I can say in a critical sense is that things sound a bit dry; small filter progression on some instruments (especially the bass elements?) could really add to that sense of build and permutation. Instruments don't seem very EQ banded/isolated from each other. I also believe you could make this good 7 minutes into an even better 5 minutes. Otherwise track is solid, sample is funny, I lolled. I'd probably DJ this track due to the minimal jacking and the lulz. Also you misspelled repetitive.

Thanks for posting, and keep at it!
Trish Vanderhaar
06.02.2013
https://soundcloud.com/miedema/miedema-loud-repeditive-music
Kenton Almeyda
16.02.2013
I listened on the speakers of a LCD TV in my hotel room while drinking "Lagunitas Sucks!". Go 2013! Here's my feedback.

Needs more cowbell.

Attachment 15836

But seriously, about all I can say in a critical sense is that things sound a bit dry; small filter progression on some instruments (especially the bass elements?) could really add to that sense of build and permutation. Instruments don't seem very EQ banded/isolated from each other. I also believe you could make this good 7 minutes into an even better 5 minutes. Otherwise track is solid, sample is funny, I lolled. I'd probably DJ this track due to the minimal jacking and the lulz. Also you misspelled repetitive.

Thanks for posting, and keep at it!

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