Reply to Need help. My first track!

Hi Guys, after a lot of hard work i have finally completed my very first track! Obv im amateur. Please give me as many suggestions/tips or any thing you have to say bout it, any specific places where i have fucked up etc. Also please tell me how good is it for my 1st track. Cheers!

Here's the link to it. Need some tips from you guys.

https://soundcloud.com/sagar_s