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short clip... honesty feed back is required Posted on: 30.04.2013 by Freddie Farringer https://soundcloud.com/itsmezander/5-monthhttps://soundcloud.com/itsmezander/5...cation/s-NQ6pT one of those should work anyway, this is the start to a tune ive been working on for maybe 3 weeks on and off. everything was made in NI razor except for the percussion. im not super fond of the start, i believe its a little bland, i like the way it starts to sound once it picks up again at the end though. ive been working on actuall song production for about 2 months, using ableton live 9, and a m-audio 49 key midi controller. please be honest as possible. any thoughts advice is extremely appreciated | |
| Anh Pagliuco 02.05.2013 |
Originally Posted by Zander
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| Freddie Farringer 30.04.2013 | https://soundcloud.com/itsmezander/5-month https://soundcloud.com/itsmezander/5...cation/s-NQ6pT one of those should work anyway, this is the start to a tune ive been working on for maybe 3 weeks on and off. everything was made in NI razor except for the percussion. im not super fond of the start, i believe its a little bland, i like the way it starts to sound once it picks up again at the end though. ive been working on actuall song production for about 2 months, using ableton live 9, and a m-audio 49 key midi controller. please be honest as possible. any thoughts advice is extremely appreciated |
| Freddie Farringer 02.05.2013 | okay i get what your saying, lemme fiddle with this im not using pre recorded loops, just the samples that come with live 9. i built everything on their using those samples. |
| Anh Pagliuco 02.05.2013 |
Originally Posted by Zander
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| Freddie Farringer 02.05.2013 | Week how, like it doesn't have any luster? The sound I'm going for is kinda dutch house, so I'm glad you got that vibe. The goal with this track is really to try and find a sound and also to complete a track and challenge myself. I've made a few changes and made the track longer, like I said that was only the start, I really need feed back because I am still so new at production. Some of the suggestions I didn't understand. Scatter brain: what do you mean by uncanny stuff? Also 2 parts to the song? The one you listened to has one break down and one build into the second part of the song. Thanks again, more ideas, thoughts, anything?? |
| Iluminada Vandevoort 01.05.2013 | The lead synth is really weak imo |
| Anh Pagliuco 01.05.2013 | Let me have a listen and I'll type it out: Last drum loop sounds like its been mastered already, which is good for you since your still learning. Use that one for sure. The other uncanny stuff maybe you should put aside until your confident in what your drum sound is. Can I ask you what kind of tracks your hoping to make? It sounds little bit Swedish House/Afrojack-ish or something at this point, not sure though. I get your hook, but at least have two different parts of the song, believe of it like this, EX. verse / chorus / break / chorus / verse / chorus. Work on the sounds of what you want to play, then arrange your track accordingly. Most of your sounds should "fit" together musically. |
| Freddie Farringer 01.05.2013 | any one else have any thoughts? |
| Freddie Farringer 01.05.2013 | okay cool, thank you lemme see what can do |
| Rodolfo Oriol 01.05.2013 | I understand the whole structure of the track, but it lacks energy and groove. To improve the whole track, I suggest you.. # panning/stereo effects, delay effects on the upcoming synth around 0.30. # put some reverb on the openhat that chains with the kick, it makes it more exciting and more pumping. # some of the reversed kicks do not fit in really well, maybe lower volume. But I like them! # more uplifters! bring the fx up a bit and let them indicate when a new part comes in. Keep up! I like this track and can't wait to hear more from you! I like the ideas of the track! Cheers, PJ |
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