Reply to progress? honest responses please

https://soundcloud.com/itsmezander/5-month-progress-1/s-ULP5M

so thats where im at now if you remember i posted a sad start to a song, you can listen to that origional here

please tell me what you believe, ive considered increasing the bpm, and investing in glitch2 to get some more life into it i really enjoyed the demo version.

thanks