Reply to My first mix I really need comments!!!

Hey lads

This is one of my first sets i pulled of on my pc . Can you please tell if its good what's bad, on what do I have to pay attention.

I thank you very much if you would take your time to listen to this mix and give a comment/rating

Greetings Dilemma.

https://soundcloud.com/don-dilemma/drum-and-bass-are-you-ready