Reply to DEATHSTEP - Feedback please ?

hey guys,


i'm recrude and here's my tune i'm working on atm.
so i'm still not happy with it, because i worked 5 hours on the mixdown today and it's still not clear.
you know what i mean ?

so it would be appreciated if you give it a listen. (:

what do you believe about it ? especially the mixdown ?
what can i do better ?
how is the entire atmosphere for you ?


http://www10.zippyshare.com/v/37140752/file.html