Reply to Rate my EPK

there was a DJTT article a while ago about building an EPK in preparation to approaching promoters about getting booked
(you can find it here: http://www.djranking s.com/2010/11/2...ctronic-press/)

I built one a while ago and had some success with it getting booked around TX and a date in CO, but after taking a few months off to save money and prepare to take music seriously, I'd like to be as prepared as possible moving forward.

I'd love any feedback you guys could give me. No detail is off limits and I promise I won't get offended if you pick it apart and find every possible misstep and flaw.

thanks ahead of time

Here's the download link: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ouk2ru45qa9vu8m

as well as some links to my pages for reference:
www.facebook.com/AhabMusic
www.soundcloud.com/Adam-Jilek
www.twitter.com/AhabDJ