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Posted on: 06.05.2013 by Lyndsey Hsiang
Hi

pretty new to all this, but to give you a bit of history i love electro/dubstep/drum and bass/techno so a bit of everything really, and would really like to produce/mix all of the above,I use Reason and VirtualDj at the moment and iv got a few things up on soundcloud and i keep playing around with things but i would love some feedback on where im going right/wrong any help??? http://soundcloud.com/djup-5
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by djmetalgear
Dude what?

In all honesty, that's some of the worst "music" I've heard. Can't tell if this is a joke... Esp after seeing ur soundcloud pic.
And his real name above his location?!
Lyndsey Hsiang
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by djmetalgear
Dude what?
Was just lookin 4 some advice from like minded people who enjoy music as I'm pretty sure that's how anyone does anything, they get advice from people who have more experience, clearly I was wrong
Lyndsey Hsiang
06.05.2013		Hi

pretty new to all this, but to give you a bit of history i love electro/dubstep/drum and bass/techno so a bit of everything really, and would really like to produce/mix all of the above,I use Reason and VirtualDj at the moment and iv got a few things up on soundcloud and i keep playing around with things but i would love some feedback on where im going right/wrong any help??? http://soundcloud.com/djup-5
Yajaira Harang
06.05.2013		totaly agree, i don't believe anyone can tell this is shit ! I don't like that type of music but, of course, with a little more i'm sure you could start doing something very interesting !
I guess you have to work but positive thing for you is that you are free to do what you want...

Learn and have fun !
Emelina Chillson
06.05.2013		We all start somewhere man. I can tell by the notation that you understand structure and key. Now you just need to chill back and spend more time organizing your ideas. Work on your instrumental first then match your drums. The end of that tune is pretty ill actually. Have fun man. Experiment. The great thing about music is that it is an artforma dn there is no right or wrong way to do things.
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by Karlos Santos
FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
In that case, for me the first thing that seems to stand out is that there is far too much going on at once throughout a lot of the track, and all of things that are going on are jostling for position and not one of them is winning.

Pick a part of your track that you really like, or that grooves really well and try and bring this to the fore.

I believe that development of your ideas is key, too. At the moment, your track seems to jump from one idea to the next without it seeming to make much sense as from how you got from A - B.

To break this down a bit (and speaking as a classically trained musician), believe of it like a journey (yes, a clich
nayit ruiz jaramillo
06.05.2013		FFS will you guys just quit it.

This guy is not a troll. He has just started out. If you don't like his music, either be constructively critical or shut up.

If he is guilty of one thing it is being over exuberant and posting stuff up before it is or he is ready.

He asked to be advised on where he is going wrong. He didn't come on saying "listen to my amazing music".

Grow up.
Ngoc Ninow
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by djmetalgear
Dude what?

In all honesty, that's some of the worst "music" I've heard. Can't tell if this is a joke... Esp after seeing ur soundcloud pic.
And his real name above his location?!
Meaghan Machold
06.05.2013		http://community .djranking s.com/showthread.php?t=71036
Lillia Datson
06.05.2013		Troll. Has to be a Troll!
Lyndsey Hsiang
06.05.2013
Originally Posted by djmetalgear
Dude what?
Was just lookin 4 some advice from like minded people who enjoy music as I'm pretty sure that's how anyone does anything, they get advice from people who have more experience, clearly I was wrong
Augustine Mitzen
06.05.2013		hit DJ Wanka up for collabs, his music sounds like it could be your kind of thing
Tesha Freudenstein
06.05.2013		lolwut?
Meaghan Machold
06.05.2013		Dude what?

In all honesty, that's some of the worst "music" I've heard. Can't tell if this is a joke... Esp after seeing ur soundcloud pic.

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